Free Marketing Course – Lesson #16 – How to Write Killer Copy Part III

Here’s how to really push your prospects into a passionate purchasing frenzy

In lesson #13 and #15 we discussed portions of the B.I.C.T. formula for writing strong copy.

In this lesson we are going to reveal what the “B” stands for and how to profit from it.

B is for benefits. Benefits are not just important for creating strong copy, but critical. Moving someone to action without a benefit for them is difficult. The only way I know to move someone without using benefits in your copy is to use blind curiosity or trickery. (I don’t suggest either)

For example, a copywriter named Harry Pickens released a program titled, “How To Think Like A Marketing Genius”. In the program he spoke of an insurance salesman who sent letters that got a 100% response rate. The odd thing is, the letter contained zero benefits. How’s that possible?

Well… first off, the letters were sent to the agent’s house list. Those are existing clients of the insurance agent. Second, the letter said one thing and one thing only: ‘call me immediately about your insurance policy’.

What do you think happened? Customers freaked out thinking their policy was being canceled. So they called. 100% response rate. That’s using curiosity.

For most products and services, such an approach would not work very well.

Can you imagine if a complete stranger from a car dealership sent a letter saying, ‘please call me about your car’? What would happen?

A lot of people would toss the letter into the trash without a second thought. Those who did call would probably be pretty pissed off. Too pissed off to buy anything now or in the future from that dealership. Blind curiosity might work well on existing clients, but not others. Buyers don’t like being manipulated.

Don’t put yourself through such headaches. A better choice is to communicate the exact benefits that appeal to your ideal clients and prospects.

But isn’t that a Catch-22? How can you communicate the benefits complete strangers want, if you have not yet communicated with those strangers? Easy.

1) Use the SRDS and similar directories to find associations, magazines, and other publications that reach to the same prospects as you are going after. Look for the common interests, goals, problems and desires being addressed.

2) Run surveys and Ask-campaigns to determine interests. I’ve done this with much success. Maybe offer a free report, ebook, or product in exchange for feedback. As mentioned in a previous lesson, this works very well. It’s a great way to identify common concerns among members of your target market.

3) Recall the clients you’ve worked with in the past and ask yourself questions similar to these:

  • what do your clients get by doing business with you
  • what is the biggest problem facing your prospects
  • what will happen if they don’t solve this problem
  • what will happen when they do solve it

Knowing the answers to these questions, and others, will help you create client-centered benefits. Then what do you do with those benefits? Create a list of bullets points. Preferably two to three pages of bullets explaining the benefits you offer. The benefits of working with you. And the benefits of your products and services.

Your list of bullet benefits will help you ethically move to action the exact people who want the benefits you offer.

That said, despite what many copywriters claim, benefits are NOT the end-all, be-all of good copywriting.

The most important element in your copy is the “C” portion of the BICT formula. The “C” portion of the formula carries more weight, more value, and more impact on your response than each of the other elements combined.

We will discuss the “C” portion of the formula in a future lesson.

Warm Regards,


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