If you know that your website or sales letter should be bringing in more cash,
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From the desk of:
Andre Bell, Freelance Writer
Famed psychologist Abraham Maslow is probably most
famous for saying, "to the person who only has a hammer all problems look like a
nail."
This is most true in marketing...
Just look around. More people than ever before in human history have popped up
claiming you can get rich from just one sales letter or ad. 'You are just one
sales letter away from gobs of wealth' is their mantra.
HOGWASH!
What these unscrupulous opportunists fail to see is there's more to running a
business than a simple ad or sales letter could ever address. They themselves are blind to
what marketing really is. Marketing isn't a single sales letter. It isn't simply
an ad in the Yellow Pages or newspaper either.
To build a successful company requires more than a single promotion. You need to
focus on each of these key areas of business growth:
Improve the efficiency and responsiveness of the
marketing you're already doing
Define and clearly articulate a dominant competitive
advantage
and make sure your entire staff, clients, and prospects
know what makes you different, better
Cross sell, upsell, back end sell, and look for
reactivation opportunities
Develop complimentary alliances with other
businesses
Exploit advertising media opportunities
Develop community relations and publicity
opportunities
Profit from direct response marketing and
advertising
Gain new business and sell more to existing clients
through smart use of the internet
Find new uses for your products and services you may
have overlooked until now
Each of those areas is critical for your success.
A single sales letter or ad can never address each of these areas. That's
dreadful... especially when you consider the outrageous cost of hiring someone
to write just a single sales letter or ad.
Money In The Bank -- Theirs
Many so called 'professional' copywriters charge $25,000 to write a single sales
letter. The top writers charge much more ($45,000 on up). And the major ad
agencies won't even look at you if you don't have two million dollars or more to
spend.
Those high fees don't even come close to touching all nine areas of marketing.
It isn't that those writers don't want to help you succeed. They simply don't
have an in-depth knowledge of marketing -- and no incentive to learn.
Today, anyone can buy a book, video, or course that claims to teach how to write
ads and sales letter... then tell the reader to claim to be a copywriter -- and
start asking for $25,000 fees. That is why the world is now saturated with
copywriters.
However, to adapt all nine critical areas of marketing into your business takes
years of knowledge. Either a person gains that knowledge through decades
of personal experience as I have, or years studying the documented works of
others...which I've also done.
But investing years of study is not what today's 'pros' are going to do.
Today's copywriters are looking for quick cash in their own pockets. They
are not looking to invest months or years studying marketing. Really, why should
they? After all, if they can convince enough people to spend $25,000 on a single
sales letter there's no point in learning how to actually do anything more than
cut-and-paste generic templates.
I Bet You Think This Song Is About You
Don't You? Don't You?
I know you probably want greater success from your business. And you probably want your promotions to succeed.
How do I know this? You wouldn't have read or skimmed this far if you didn't.
So I'm going to show you a few insider 'tricks' about writing better sales
letters and ads... so you won't fall victim to anyone. And if after reading this
material you decide you want to grow beyond a single sales letter, I hope you
decide to contact me. As a copywriter and marketing strategist I do more than
write 'cookie cutter' sales letters and then charge $25,000 fees.
Here's How To 'Hit One Out Of The Ballpark'
If you want your next promotion to be a homerun here's what you need to
understand...
Only you know
what keeps your prospects awake at night wanting a solution to their problems --
whether you realize it or not. No template, ebook, instant letter writing
software, or anything else written months or years ago can hammer away at the
specific needs, desires, and wants of your target market.
Here's the good news...
If your business isn't the success you dreamed of, I'm going to show you how to tap into your unique knowledge to increase your
sales and make more money with your words -- without getting taken to the
cleaners.
It doesn't matter what industry you work in.
It doesn't matter the state of the economy. And it doesn't matter how strongly
entrenched your competitors are either. Whether you're looking for insurance sales letters,
direct mail letters, real estate sales letters, sample
consulting letters, charity or donation sales letters, internet sales letters, or sales
letters for any other industry or use... these tips will
work for you.
The Three Letter Word That Makes Men Crazy
I must admit it. I get all tingly just thinking about
it.
Really. It's almost as exciting and addictive as that
three-letter-word most guys think about all day long. Making money with
words is as exciting as thinking about your favorite c.a.r. (you weren't
thinking s.e.x. where you?)
Anyhow... knowing how to make money with
the power of your pen or keyboardis a great feeling.
I love it when a
package I put
together online or offline starts bringing in the bucks. Seeing checks in my mailbox
and money growing in my online
accounts --all generated from nothing but words-- that's a
major turn on. Sorry but it's true.
If you've experienced making money with your words you know exactly what I'm
talking about. If you've haven't felt
it yet, hopefully you won't have to only imagine the thrill and excitement for
much longer.
I
know of no other way to legally bring in cash as quickly and
consistently as a powerful and persuasive sales message.
Sales from direct mail total over two trillion dollars annually.
Plus an estimated 300 billion dollars more are made and earned online... much of which comes from
persuasive sales letters. Obviously it is possible to make money with just
words.
So what's the key to making your next promotion a real winner? Research. And
following tried-and-true principles.
Here's something brief you need to know about doing
research:
The more you know about your product, your market, the general state of
the world around you, and your competition... the more you can persuade and
motivate others to take action.
There's not enough time to detail all of the steps involved.
Just remember that research is the key to sales success.
The Keys To Your Kingdom
Here's what you need to do with your
copy if you want to make money just from the words you
type on your computer keyboard.
First, there's failure avoidance.
This is important because if you do the
things guaranteed to lead to failure you've no chance for success.
Most failed direct mail attempts are the result of violating most if not all of the fatal marketing and advertising mistakes that are disclosed in my
report 32 Fatal
Marketing Mistakes Everyone Is Making.
Remove those 32 mistakes and your chance for success increases 100-fold. Violate
those principles and you risk total slaughter of any potential for sales success.
By the way, keep reading to learn how to request a free copy of my 32 Fatal
Marketing Mistakes Everyone Is Making And How To Fix Them report and audio
CD.
These Little Mistakes Are Costing Companies
Billions
Other mistakes that kill any
potential for sales:
Sending a single letter and then sitting back crying because
the mailing costs exceeded the income earned. The majority of your sales
come from mailing multiple messages to each recipient, not just one letter.
If you plan on mailing only one letter and expecting to get rich, I
seriously suggest not mailing at all. Your
profits will likely remain the same. Zero.
Sending the letter to the wrong people. My goodness, this is
so heavily violated that it should be the Eleventh Commandment: "Though
Shall Not Mail to Complete Strangers Who Have NOT Identified Themselves As
Having A Connection With You Or A Prior Interest In What You Offer!"
Don't waste time mailing to an untargeted list. It won't work.
And the Twelfth Commandment: "Though Shall Not Put People
To Sleep With A Boring and Passive Sales Message!" -zzzz
How To Create Direct Mail Copy That
Sells
After you've eliminated those
mistakes from your marketing you must next write content that is compelling and
interesting.
Your message must grab your reader by the eyeballs and make it impossible
for him to bat an eye for fear of missing something juicy. That's what effective
direct mail copy does for you.
So what are the steps in creating content that
will keep
your readers glued to your sales letter?
Here they are:
Write compelling content that magnetically attracts readers,
like sugar water attracts humming birds -- it's impossible for them to resist
you.
Use a powerful "hook"
throughout your message. All great ads use a hook to set the ad apart from every other message that competes for the attention of the same market. The
last thing a sales message should do is sound like every other ad that is
out there. When it comes to marketing, sameness will kill your sales.
Focus your message on benefits to your reader. Remember
W.I.I.F.M.
Use plenty of credibility statements and proof.
And most of all...
...Preach To The Choir!
Communicate your message to people who already
want what you're selling, or have shown a
predisposition towards believing you. The worst way of selling
is to waste time trying to educate anyone on why they should
want what you're selling. That's a quick way to failure.
Probably the quickest.
Instead keep this in mind: it's easier to preach Jesus to
Christians than to atheists. It's easier to persuade Buddhists
to follow the ways of Buddha, than to get a Christian to do so.
The same holds true to what you're selling. It
is far easier to sell to people who already want what you're
selling than to sell to people who must first be convinced of the
value of your product or service.
Of what
value is it to try to sell an AK-47 to a member of an Anti-Gun movement? None.
You would be wasting your time. But what about selling a shotgun or spear or
crossbow to someone living in a rainforest? Think you'd have a better chance at
success there? You bet.
That's one of the major secrets to copywriting success.
You filter
out those who don't have an interest for what you're selling, and communicate only to
those who do have an interest.
This will help...
Discover The Secrets For
Turning Your Words Into Cash
The above layout is considered one of the most effective formats for a direct mail
piece. It has a pre-head, a subhead, and an attention-grabbing picture (ideally
the picture should be of the writer of the letter). Oh. The headline format
above is malformed if you plan to send hundreds of thousands or millions of
copies of your letter. For smaller mailings, the results of changing the format
is nearly negligible.
Synopsis: The "before" flyer on the left was created by the owner of
an otherwise successful company. She
was trying to generate new sales leads for her business. The problem is she had no prior
training creating sales copy before her attempt to create that flyer. No one responded to her flyer.
I commended her for trying though. At least she included a specific offer (so many ads fail big on
that point).
Anyhow, here's why the original flyer failed and what we did to fix it:
After the client handed her flyer to
me I read it several times. At first glance the words 'what
would you rather be doing' were confusing. I didn't understand what she
was asking people if they'd rather do? (Win the lottery, walk a tight rope or something else)?
I was also confused over what they
were being asked if they'd want to stop doing? And
who in the world is being addressed in her example? I just didn't
get it.
So I asked a few questions:
What are you trying to sell?
Who are you trying to reach?
Where is this flyer being used?
Afterwards I followed up with a few questions about the company
and its history. Turns out the company was trying to promote
custom painting services to affluent homeowners living on golf courses. At
a glance that is not being communicated in her flyer. You have about two
seconds to catch someone's attention and communicate why they should give
you more of their attention than that.
"What would you rather be doing?"
doesn't say a thing about painting your home or going golfing. No one
is going to read the flyer to find out either. In fact no one did. The flyer
got tossed out without a single phone call.
The problem is 90% of the
company's client base is
made up of wealthy, widowed, women. Despite that knowledge, the company
had spent thousands of dollars marketing to all affluent homeowners and many commercial clients in their
geographic target area.
I advised the company to instead focus on the market they are most successful with.
And even better, show a member of the target market enjoying the benefits of the services the company offers. In
this case it's older women who are successful in life who enjoy being
out on the
golf course.
The 'after' example is the result of targeting a specific market.
As you can see it is a much more effective and powerful example
than the clipart example the company originally tried using.
Besides being a great flyer or insert,
my example can also double easily as a postcard with a few formatting changes. Double value
for single work!
Credits:
The stock photo is available from inmagine.com. I highly recommend
their services for photos
The layout was inspired by the work of famed adman David Ogilvy of
Ogilvy & Mather
The headline was inspired by studying the work of
another of my chosen mentors, Dan Kennedy
The words in the flyer were inspired by the works of Caples, Rooser Reeves,
John E Kennedy, Mr. Lasker and way too many other masters of copywriting who've
since come and gone. For competitive reasons, other than the headline, the
original content is excluded from my 'after' example
When you sit down to create sales copy there's a lot to consider. For example, here are
a few of the primary components that make up responsive sales copy:
the hook
the offer
the guarantee
reason-why
benefits
third-party credibility
verifiable track record
use of emotion (this is a big one)
attention grabbing headline
a picture that is irresistible to ignore
use of postscripts (P.S.)
and urgency
Those are just the beginning elements.
There are hundreds more 'tricks of the trade' that get inside
the head of your reader and prevents them from putting down your sale piece
until they finish reading it.
I'll give you an example of one of the most powerful 'tricks' in a minute.
Why Write Until Your Hand Hurts?
Here's an insider copywriting secret: few direct response copywriters
write from scratch. Instead, they grab sales letters and ads already proven
to generate millions (and in some cases billions) of dollars. Then they simply
re-write those sales letters. If you hire one of those unethical marketers, you could end up paying a
'professional' $25,000 to do nothing more than copy someone else's
already proven sales letter.
What a rip off!
Don't bother paying that kind of money for something any kid can do.
That process of 'stealing' someone else's work is called "swiping". As strange
as this may sound, it's perfectly legal. That's because no one can patent or copyright an idea.
The good thing for you is, you can copy the concepts from any good ad or
sales letter and produce the same results for your offer. That's because the
psychology that moved someone to buy one thing, will move people to buy another.
Human nature never changes.
To get started at writing your own copy simply find a few winning sales letters.
Then copy
the letters by inserting information about your product or service.
Don't copy the
words!!! That
will get you into hot water. Copy the ideas.
I will get into exactly how to do this in more
detail in a moment. For now just remember, swiping proven sales copy will
improve your response much better than risking your reputation on one of the
thousands of generic sales letter templates littering the internet. And much
better than writing from scratch--unless you've studied copywriting in-depth.
The Proof Is In The Pudding...
Hey, do you remember I said, "There are hundreds more 'tricks of the trade'
that get inside the head of your reader and prevents them from putting down your
sale piece until they finish reading it..." ?
Here's a copywriting secret you won't find
available free to the general public: the human brain is designed to solve problems.
If you give it a situation that is unresolved it will continue until that
problem is solved or can be erased from memory, forgotten. The brain hates cliffhangers.
So if
you want someone to keep reading your words, you simply tell them
something like,
"I'll give you an example in a minute. But first..." then you go onto some other
subject.
I used at least three cliffhangers in this article. Did you catch them
all before I revealed this technique?
Or did you scroll through this article in hopes of finding what I hinted at?
Or did you just keep on reading all the way through to this point in hopes of
coming across the information?
Either way, the cliffhangers are designed to make you do that. Use cliffhangers
in your sales letters too, and your readers will be forced to continue reading or skimming until they find what you were
holding out from them. Just like you did ;-)
That's just one way to guarantee your message gets read.
Ok, so that's how to create ads and sales letters that move people to action. As
you can see, a lot of work goes into creating successful sales promotions.
Maybe you're now ready to tackle your next promotion yourself. That's great. But
if you're tired of studying and reading, if you just want the work done for you,
if you want to finally just sit back and watch your sales grow... simply
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Maybe until now you've written
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inherently wrong
with that. But sometimes because we are too close to our
own business it's hard to see how to improve our results
without working harder or longer. At times we need a
little helping hand and an independent viewpoint to help
free us for activities we are best suited for...to lessen the frustrations of running a business.
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